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Post by Silverstream on Apr 3, 2007 21:02:04 GMT -5
This is where I post my story's, and poems, and such, feel free to rate them.
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Post by Silverstream on Apr 3, 2007 21:07:01 GMT -5
From 'ore the hill above the sea look at your will and you will see me A'wating for my hero to come across the sea Waiting for my superhero Just I, myself, and me
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Post by Lorelei Spikepaw on Apr 6, 2007 23:26:05 GMT -5
Good job, Silver. Did you just make this poem up from this spot? If yes, then I give you 5..... out of 5. If not, I give you a 3... out of 10
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Post by Silverstream on Apr 7, 2007 8:49:55 GMT -5
I made it up on the spot, that is how it usually is with me and poetry.
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Post by Lorelei Spikepaw on Apr 9, 2007 10:31:11 GMT -5
Ditto. Good job. But I think you can do much better. A bit longer, if you may.
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